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Translation - German-English - Wundenhaupt

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Title	Wundenhaupt
Text Submitted by Freya	Source language: German Auf dunklen BÃ¤nken sitzen sie gedrÃ¤ngt Und heben die erlosch`nen Blicke auf Zum Kreuz. Die Lichter schimmern wie verhÃ¤ngt, Und trÃ¼b und wie verhÃ¤ngt das Wundenhaupt.
Remarks about the translation	I would like to have translated only this first part of the song 'Die tote Kirche', by L'Ã‚me Immortelle. Thank you. :)

Title	On dark benches they sit closelyAnd ...
Translation English Translated by Zwenni	Target language: English On dark benches they sit closely And rise the extinct gazes up To the cross. The lights shimmer as if covered, And hazy and as if covered, the wounded head.

Validated by Lein - 9 September 2010 14:21

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		7 September 2010 11:59
	Lein จำนวนข้อความ: 3389	Hi Zwenni, This looks good. I've set a poll to get some imput from others. Just a style-related remark: I think 'as if' would sound better here than 'like', in both cases, but especially in the last sentence. Do you agree? Let me konw what you think! Thanks
		7 September 2010 12:53
	Zwenni จำนวนข้อความ: 4	Hi Lein, you are right. I totally agree on your remark and would change "like" to "as if" in both cases Regards Zwenni
		7 September 2010 14:52
	Lein จำนวนข้อความ: 3389	This is a remark from Lilian; see if you agree: My doubt is if "woundhead" is a noun in English. Shouldn't it be "the wounded head"? If so, then I think a comma is needed. "...and (also? ) hazy and as if covered, the wounded head."
		7 September 2010 15:53
	Zwenni จำนวนข้อความ: 4	Again, I have to agree I would use: "and hazy and as if covered, the wounded head."
		7 September 2010 15:56
	Lein จำนวนข้อความ: 3389	Done! Thank you!