Cucumis - Ókeypis álinju umsetingar tænasta

Heim

Torg

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Yndis umsetingar
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•‎Umseting av heimasíðuni
•‎Leita

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Umseting - Týkst-Enskt - Wundenhaupt

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Hesin teksturin er tøkur í fylgjandi málum:

Týkst

Enskt

Bólkur Songur

Heiti	Wundenhaupt
Tekstur Framborið av Freya	Uppruna mál: Týkst Auf dunklen BÃ¤nken sitzen sie gedrÃ¤ngt Und heben die erlosch`nen Blicke auf Zum Kreuz. Die Lichter schimmern wie verhÃ¤ngt, Und trÃ¼b und wie verhÃ¤ngt das Wundenhaupt.
Viðmerking um umsetingina	I would like to have translated only this first part of the song 'Die tote Kirche', by L'Ã‚me Immortelle. Thank you. :)

Heiti	On dark benches they sit closelyAnd ...
Umseting Enskt Umsett av Zwenni	Ynskt mál: Enskt On dark benches they sit closely And rise the extinct gazes up To the cross. The lights shimmer as if covered, And hazy and as if covered, the wounded head.

Góðkent av Lein - 9 September 2010 14:21

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	Høvundur	Eini boð
		7 September 2010 11:59
	Lein Tal av boðum: 3389	Hi Zwenni, This looks good. I've set a poll to get some imput from others. Just a style-related remark: I think 'as if' would sound better here than 'like', in both cases, but especially in the last sentence. Do you agree? Let me konw what you think! Thanks
		7 September 2010 12:53
	Zwenni Tal av boðum: 4	Hi Lein, you are right. I totally agree on your remark and would change "like" to "as if" in both cases Regards Zwenni
		7 September 2010 14:52
	Lein Tal av boðum: 3389	This is a remark from Lilian; see if you agree: My doubt is if "woundhead" is a noun in English. Shouldn't it be "the wounded head"? If so, then I think a comma is needed. "...and (also? ) hazy and as if covered, the wounded head."
		7 September 2010 15:53
	Zwenni Tal av boðum: 4	Again, I have to agree I would use: "and hazy and as if covered, the wounded head."
		7 September 2010 15:56
	Lein Tal av boðum: 3389	Done! Thank you!