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| | 27 אוקטובר 2011 21:03 |
| Leinמספר הודעות: 3389 | Hi Rollingmaster
What do you mean by 'in a way signed'?
Does it mean 'have been signed and are attached'? Or (if it is clear the writer has signed them) 'I have signed the relevant documents and attached them'? |
| | 27 אוקטובר 2011 21:45 |
| | The relevant documents are in the attachment in a signed way. |
| | 28 אוקטובר 2011 11:13 |
| Leinמספר הודעות: 3389 | Thanks! 'in a xx way' is something you can use to specify how something is being done (he is walking in an odd way), but not about a noun (here: the documents). I have edited and set a poll - let me know if you don't agree |
| | 28 אוקטובר 2011 11:57 |
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| | 31 אוקטובר 2011 11:37 |
| | I'd write the letter/email more formal, for ex. "Your faithfully" instead of "have a good day" |
| | 31 אוקטובר 2011 15:21 |
| Leinמספר הודעות: 3389 | Hi gamine
You said something could be improved; could you let us know what, please?
Thanks!
Italo, is your suggestion based on the French version? As the writer is using the person's name and not 'Dear Mrs xx', I think 'have a good day' does not sound wrong or awkward here. CC: gamine |
| | 31 אוקטובר 2011 15:27 |
| | Hi Lein,
my suggestion is based on the French version.
"Chère Madame Tahibauth", I don't know if it's the person's first name |
| | 31 אוקטובר 2011 18:33 |
| Leinמספר הודעות: 3389 | Rollingmaster or another Turkish expert,
Can you tell if 'Tahibaut' is a first name (as here, in the English translation) or a last name (as in the French translation)?
Thanks! CC: Bilge Ertan handyy |
| | 31 אוקטובר 2011 18:44 |
| | I don't have any idea. It is not a Turkish name. |
| | 31 אוקטובר 2011 18:49 |
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| | 31 אוקטובר 2011 19:03 |
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| | 1 נובמבר 2011 11:04 |
| | Dear Mrs. Tahibauth
Please find attached the documents in question, dully signed.
Best regards, |
| | 1 נובמבר 2011 11:13 |
| Leinמספר הודעות: 3389 | Thanks all
Francky, you didn't understand our point: if this was a first name, the message is quite informal and 'have a good day' would be perfectly appropriate. If this message was addressed to Mr or Mrs Tahibauth, it becomes more formal and 'best regards' or something similar would seem better.
Thanks anyway! |