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| | 27 Οκτώβριος 2011 21:03 |
| LeinΑριθμός μηνυμάτων: 3389 | Hi Rollingmaster
What do you mean by 'in a way signed'?
Does it mean 'have been signed and are attached'? Or (if it is clear the writer has signed them) 'I have signed the relevant documents and attached them'? |
| | 27 Οκτώβριος 2011 21:45 |
| | The relevant documents are in the attachment in a signed way. |
| | 28 Οκτώβριος 2011 11:13 |
| LeinΑριθμός μηνυμάτων: 3389 | Thanks! 'in a xx way' is something you can use to specify how something is being done (he is walking in an odd way), but not about a noun (here: the documents). I have edited and set a poll - let me know if you don't agree |
| | 28 Οκτώβριος 2011 11:57 |
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| | 31 Οκτώβριος 2011 11:37 |
| | I'd write the letter/email more formal, for ex. "Your faithfully" instead of "have a good day" |
| | 31 Οκτώβριος 2011 15:21 |
| LeinΑριθμός μηνυμάτων: 3389 | Hi gamine
You said something could be improved; could you let us know what, please?
Thanks!
Italo, is your suggestion based on the French version? As the writer is using the person's name and not 'Dear Mrs xx', I think 'have a good day' does not sound wrong or awkward here. CC: gamine |
| | 31 Οκτώβριος 2011 15:27 |
| | Hi Lein,
my suggestion is based on the French version.
"Chère Madame Tahibauth", I don't know if it's the person's first name |
| | 31 Οκτώβριος 2011 18:33 |
| LeinΑριθμός μηνυμάτων: 3389 | Rollingmaster or another Turkish expert,
Can you tell if 'Tahibaut' is a first name (as here, in the English translation) or a last name (as in the French translation)?
Thanks! CC: Bilge Ertan handyy |
| | 31 Οκτώβριος 2011 18:44 |
| | I don't have any idea. It is not a Turkish name. |
| | 31 Οκτώβριος 2011 18:49 |
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| | 31 Οκτώβριος 2011 19:03 |
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| | 1 Νοέμβριος 2011 11:04 |
| | Dear Mrs. Tahibauth
Please find attached the documents in question, dully signed.
Best regards, |
| | 1 Νοέμβριος 2011 11:13 |
| LeinΑριθμός μηνυμάτων: 3389 | Thanks all
Francky, you didn't understand our point: if this was a first name, the message is quite informal and 'have a good day' would be perfectly appropriate. If this message was addressed to Mr or Mrs Tahibauth, it becomes more formal and 'best regards' or something similar would seem better.
Thanks anyway! |