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Translation - Portuguese-German - que tudo na minha vida brilhe como os teus...

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que tudo na minha vida brilhe como os teus...
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Submitted by maxsha
Source language: Portuguese

que tudo na minha vida brilhe como os teus olhos,seja taõ maravilhoso como o teu coraçaõ,lindo como tu...se o amor que sinto por ti for um sonho,quero dormir eternamente

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dass alles in meinem Leben so glänzt wie deine...
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German

Translated by Rodrigues
Target language: German

dass alles in meinem Leben so glänze wie deine Augen, so wunderbar sei wie dein Herz, so schön wie du... wenn die Liebe, die ich für dich empfinde, ein Traum ist, möchte ich ewig schlafen
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Validated by lilian canale - 19 January 2010 17:50





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7 January 2010 23:42

gbernsdorff
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wenn die Liebe, die ich für dich empfinde, ein Traum wäre, möchte ich ewig schlafen
[NB the source text is incorrect; after 'for' there should be 'queria']

8 January 2010 11:33

Lein
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I don't really agree - 'for' is not the same as 'fosse'.

Se o amor (...)fosse um sonho, queria dormir sempre
(If love were a dream, I would want to sleep forever)
Se o amor for um sonho, quero dormir sempre
(If love is a dream, I want to sleep forever)

See if you agree, Guido!

As for the translation: see my comments above -> is 'wäre' correct here? I think it should be 'ist' but I don't always trust my German.

Also, since the original is Portuguese from Portugal, not from Brazil, 'du' means simply 'you' and does not refer to God so Du, Dein and Deine should not be capitalised.

CC: gbernsdorff

8 January 2010 11:54

gbernsdorff
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Yes Lein, you are right. My interpretation was wrong there; sorry about that, Rodrigues. And, yes 'ist' is better.
I agree about not capitalising.

9 January 2010 01:28

Rodrigues
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new poll after edit.

17 January 2010 15:19

Rodrigues
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some admin for acceptance?