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Translation - Duits-Engels - Wundenhaupt

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Category Song

Title	Wundenhaupt
Text Submitted by Freya	Source language: Duits Auf dunklen BÃ¤nken sitzen sie gedrÃ¤ngt Und heben die erlosch`nen Blicke auf Zum Kreuz. Die Lichter schimmern wie verhÃ¤ngt, Und trÃ¼b und wie verhÃ¤ngt das Wundenhaupt.
Remarks about the translation	I would like to have translated only this first part of the song 'Die tote Kirche', by L'Ã‚me Immortelle. Thank you. :)

Title	On dark benches they sit closelyAnd ...
Translation Engels Translated by Zwenni	Target language: Engels On dark benches they sit closely And rise the extinct gazes up To the cross. The lights shimmer as if covered, And hazy and as if covered, the wounded head.

Laaste geakkrediteerde redigering deur Lein - 9 September 2010 14:21

Last messages

	Author	Message
		7 September 2010 11:59
	Lein Number of messages: 3389	Hi Zwenni, This looks good. I've set a poll to get some imput from others. Just a style-related remark: I think 'as if' would sound better here than 'like', in both cases, but especially in the last sentence. Do you agree? Let me konw what you think! Thanks
		7 September 2010 12:53
	Zwenni Number of messages: 4	Hi Lein, you are right. I totally agree on your remark and would change "like" to "as if" in both cases Regards Zwenni
		7 September 2010 14:52
	Lein Number of messages: 3389	This is a remark from Lilian; see if you agree: My doubt is if "woundhead" is a noun in English. Shouldn't it be "the wounded head"? If so, then I think a comma is needed. "...and (also? ) hazy and as if covered, the wounded head."
		7 September 2010 15:53
	Zwenni Number of messages: 4	Again, I have to agree I would use: "and hazy and as if covered, the wounded head."
		7 September 2010 15:56
	Lein Number of messages: 3389	Done! Thank you!