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Translation - Serbian-English - Onaj je lepsa od noci njen miris u kosi do neba...
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Title
Onaj je lepsa od noci njen miris u kosi do neba...
Text
Submitted by
emyka
Source language: Serbian
Onaj je lepsa od noci njen miris u kosi do neba me nosi i zanosi, rodjena samo za mene, ljepota od zene bez nje mi se kuci ne ide.
Title
She is prettier than the night, ...
Translation
English
Translated by
maki_sindja
Target language: English
She is prettier than the night, the scent of her hair takes me to the sky, it charms me. The beautiful woman born just for me, I don't feel like going home without her.
Remarks about the translation
The first word "onaj" shoud be "ona".
Validated by
lilian canale
- 9 September 2008 04:27
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7 September 2008 19:04
lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
Perhaps "takes me to the sky" instead of "brings..."
"the beauty of a woman born just for me" would sound better.
"without it" What does that 'it' stand for? the beauty?
7 September 2008 20:25
maki_sindja
Number of messages: 1206
At first I thought it refers to the beauty but I read it once more (carefully). I think it refers to the woman.
7 September 2008 20:33
maki_sindja
Number of messages: 1206
Maybe "the beauty of a woman" should be "the beautiful woman".
I would like someone else who speaks Serbian to give his/her opinion.
7 September 2008 20:45
lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
Actually that would make more sense. I'll set a poll and see what people think, OK?
7 September 2008 21:13
maki_sindja
Number of messages: 1206
OK.