Vertaling - Deens-Duits - op og ned thomas helmig

"Für noch eineN neuen Tag" oder lyrische aber freier übersetzt: "Für einen weiteren Tag"

I'm not an expert in German but the language doesn't seem good to me.

Hi there, in case it's not clear, I wanted to recall that the vote is not exactly about the quality of the german text. It's more about the meaning of the translation. Is it conveying the meaning of the original text or not?
The german expert can decide later to edit the mistakes of the german translation if the meaning is good.

I know this is not easy decide, especially when the translations have some mistakes inside.

CC: wkn