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Pavadinimas	Aphorisme 48
Tekstas Pateikta Minny	Originalo kalba: Vokiečių Denke nicht an das, was dir misslungen ist. Das macht traurig. Denke an das, was dir gelungen ist, das macht froh.
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Pavadinimas	Aphorism 48
Vertimas Anglų Išvertė sagittarius	Kalba, į kurią verčiama: Anglų Don't think about what you missed. This makes sad. Think about what you achieved. This makes happy.

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- 2 kovas 2009 12:07

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	Autorius	Pranešimas
		1 kovas 2009 17:15
	lilian canale Žinučių kiekis: 14972	Hi sagittarius, I think it would sound better and more correct: failed ---> missed succeeded ---> achieved What do you think?
		1 kovas 2009 19:18
	sagittarius Žinučių kiekis: 118	Hi, lilian! I think "missed" is OK. But I left out "in" with succeeded: it should be "succeeded in". What do you think?
		1 kovas 2009 21:12
	lilian canale Žinučių kiekis: 14972	"achieved" is better and doesn't need a preposition.
		1 kovas 2009 21:33
	sagittarius Žinučių kiekis: 118	OK. I'll change it to "achieved". Thanks for your suggestion.
		1 kovas 2009 21:37
	lilian canale Žinučių kiekis: 14972	OK, it's at the poll now, therefore no more edits.
		1 kovas 2009 22:24
	Maybe:-) Žinučių kiekis: 338	Per essere assolutamente fedele al testo originale, si potrebbe forse omettere "you" e sostituire "it" con "this" nella quartultima e nell'ultima riga. Si avrebbe quindi "this makes sad" e "this makes glad"
		1 kovas 2009 23:48
	Francky5591 Žinučių kiekis: 12396	- "...what you missed" - "...what you achieved"
		1 kovas 2009 23:56
	lilian canale Žinučių kiekis: 14972	Hi sagittarius, according to the suggestions the lines should read: Don't think about what you (have) missed. That brings sadness. Think about what you (have) achieved. That brings happiness. I think the use of the present perfect is more suitable, however the simple past can be used too. Do you agree with this version?
		2 kovas 2009 07:30
	Tzicu-Sem Žinučių kiekis: 493	"It shall make you sad"; "It shall make you happy".
		2 kovas 2009 08:47
	3mend0 Žinučių kiekis: 49	Non pensare a ciÃ² che hai perso. Questo rattrista. Pensa a ciÃ² che ti Ã¨ riuscito. Questo rende felici.
		2 kovas 2009 11:04
	itsatrap100 Žinučių kiekis: 279	ist misslungen = has been unsuccessful gelingen, ant. of misslingen = successful
		2 kovas 2009 11:08
	sagittarius Žinučių kiekis: 118	OK. Let yours version be the best!