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Aphorisme 48
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源语言: 德语

Denke nicht an das,
was dir misslungen ist.
Das macht traurig.
Denke an das,
was dir gelungen ist,
das macht froh.
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Aphorism 48
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目的语言: 英语

Don't think about
what you missed.
This makes sad.
Think about
what you achieved.
This makes happy.
lilian canale认可或编辑 - 2009年 三月 2日 12:07





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2009年 三月 1日 17:15

lilian canale
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Hi sagittarius,
I think it would sound better and more correct:

failed ---> missed
succeeded ---> achieved

What do you think?

2009年 三月 1日 19:18

sagittarius
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Hi, lilian!

I think "missed" is OK. But I left out "in" with succeeded: it should be "succeeded in". What do you think?

2009年 三月 1日 21:12

lilian canale
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"achieved" is better and doesn't need a preposition.

2009年 三月 1日 21:33

sagittarius
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OK. I'll change it to "achieved". Thanks for your suggestion.

2009年 三月 1日 21:37

lilian canale
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OK, it's at the poll now, therefore no more edits.

2009年 三月 1日 22:24

Maybe:-)
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Per essere assolutamente fedele al testo originale, si potrebbe forse omettere "you" e sostituire "it" con "this" nella quartultima e nell'ultima riga. Si avrebbe quindi "this makes sad" e "this makes glad"

2009年 三月 1日 23:48

Francky5591
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- "...what you missed"

- "...what you achieved"

2009年 三月 1日 23:56

lilian canale
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Hi sagittarius, according to the suggestions the lines should read:


Don't think about
what you (have) missed.
That brings sadness.
Think about
what you (have) achieved.
That brings happiness.


I think the use of the present perfect is more suitable, however the simple past can be used too.

Do you agree with this version?


2009年 三月 2日 07:30

Tzicu-Sem
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"It shall make you sad";
"It shall make you happy".

2009年 三月 2日 08:47

3mend0
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Non pensare a ciò che hai perso.
Questo rattrista.
Pensa a ciò che ti è riuscito. Questo rende felici.

2009年 三月 2日 11:04

itsatrap100
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ist misslungen = has been unsuccessful
gelingen, ant. of misslingen = successful

2009年 三月 2日 11:08

sagittarius
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OK. Let yours version be the best!