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| | 16 Július 2008 00:56 |
| | Hi reggina,
Cute message, but it sounds a bit redundant. Too many "little" and "very".
Could you find some alternatives, synonyms for those in order to refine the text? |
| | 16 Július 2008 01:26 |
| | It looks better, yet I'd suggest turning "my little doll" in the first line into: "my dolly"
and "You are a very very sweet and a very beautiful little girl." could be:
"You are really sweet and a lovely little girl".
What do you think?
Does it change the meaning any sense? |
| | 17 Július 2008 07:22 |
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| | 17 Július 2008 20:26 |
| | ÎΟΜΙΖΩ ΠΩΣ ΤΟ ΄΄ΣΕ ΜΙΣΟ ΛΕΠΤΟ'' ΘΕΛΕΙ ÎΑ ΔΕΙΞΕΙ ΕΛΑΧΙΣΤΟ ΧΡΟÎΙΚΟ ΔΙΑΣΤΗΜΑ.ΟΠΟΤΕ Η ΜΕΤΑΦΡΑΣΗ ΤΟΥ ΣΕ ''VERY SOON'' ΔΕΠΠΙΣΤΕΥΩ ΠΩΣ ΔΕΙΧÎΕΙ ΑΥΤΟ ΤΟ ÎΟΗΜΑ. ΕΠΙΣΗΣ ''ΤΟ ΚΟΥΚΛΑΚΙ ΜΟΥ'' ΠΟΥ ΜΑΤΑΦΡΑΣΤΗΚΕ ΣΕ ''LITTLE DOLL'' ΠΙΣΤΕΥΩ ΠΩΣ ΕΠΡΕΠΕ ÎΑ ΜΕΤΑΦΡΑΣΤΕΙ ΣΕ '' MY BEAUTY''. |
| | 17 Július 2008 21:13 |
| | Stavroula: δεν νομίζω ότι είναι σημαντικό να ξÎÏει ότι σε μισό λεπτό συγκεκÏιμενα θα πάει στο κÏεββάτι και όχι απλώς Ï€Î¿Î»Ï Î³ÏήγοÏα....
Lilian Canale: i'd agree with you in this part "You are really sweet and a lovely little girl" but as for ''my dolly''...i don't know it sounds too much! |
| | 17 Július 2008 21:17 |
| MideiaHozzászólások száma: 949 | In a minute I will be in bed.Or something like that..Very soon doesn't sound good to me |
| | 17 Július 2008 23:00 |
| | Το νόημα σε γενικÎÏ‚ γÏαμμÎÏ‚, δεν απÎχει Ï€Î¿Î»Ï Î±Ï€ÏŒ αυτό της γλώσσας πηγής αλλά ειπάÏχουν αÏκετά λάθη. |
| | 18 Július 2008 01:51 |
| | In a moment or in a minute |
| | 18 Július 2008 03:49 |
| | I definitely agree that "my dolly" is very strange. I've never heard anyone say that in English. "Hey baby", or "Hi my sweet" would be better.
But I don't think there's any difference between "very soon" and "in a minute" in this context. CC: lilian canale |