Tafsiri - Kibulgeri-Kituruki - ти гониш ли мрака, за да погледнеш пак зората?! ...

lütfen cevirilerime değerlendirme yaparmısınız

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CC: handyy

Merhaba Cimdake

çevirin değerlendirilme aşamasında zaten. Ben Bulgarca bilmediğim için, çeviriyi oylamaya sundum. Diğer arkadaşların oylarına göre değerlendirme sonuçlanacak. Biraz daha sabretmeni diliyorum.

Hello ViaL!

Could we have a bridge for evaluation please?
Thanks a lot!



CC: ViaLuminosa

"Do you banish the dark (in order) to look at the dawn again? Do you hear a laugh, it's my blind faith. Look, steps of dust fly away everything/all I see the end."

It's a bit weird at the end with that "everything/all", that is not connected with the other parts of the sentence at all...

Via, thank you for your bridge. ...but I guess I'll go on bothering you (so sorry) :

-- Cimdake used "sunset" instead of "dark". Is it acceptable too?

-- ...and, I couldn't understand the last sentence. Could you explain it in different words, please?

By "dark" I mean "darkness", which has nothing to do with sunset.
The last sentence is weirdly composed and it's not clear what the author meant. I've translated it literally. It does not make sense in Bulgarian too.

OK, I see! Thank you so much for your help!