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10Prevođenje - Švedski-Engleski - Jag mÃ¥ste gÃ¥ vidare utan dig, du hör aldrig av...

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Ovaj tekst je dostupan u sljedećim jezicima: ŠvedskiEngleskiTurski

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Jag måste gå vidare utan dig, du hör aldrig av...
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Izvorni jezik: Švedski

Jag måste gå vidare utan dig, du hör aldrig av dig, jag gråter över dig dag efter dag. Kan inte göra så här mot mig själv. Jag måste gå vidare. Hoppas du förstår.
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I have to move on without you,
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Engleski

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Ciljni jezik: Engleski

I have to move on without you, you never keep in touch, I cry because of you day after day. Can't do this to myself. I have to move on. I hope you understand.
Posljednji potvrdio i uredio lilian canale - 2 listopad 2008 01:24





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1 listopad 2008 21:18

cristallic
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The part with I'm crying over you, day after day. Needs reworking and another expression might be suitable. There needs to be an 'I' In the Can't do this to myself sensense as well. The rest is ok.

1 listopad 2008 21:59

pias
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Hello cristallic,
thank you for the input. I think that since there is no "I" in the original, I can skip it in the translation. What about to write: "I'm crying every day over you". Better?

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1 listopad 2008 23:08

cristallic
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Hello Lilian Canale^^
Personally I wouldn't use 'over you' if I wanted to sound really good. Perhaps something in style with Day after day I cry for you, I cry for you every day. Something like it. Have a good evening.

1 listopad 2008 23:27

lilian canale
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Hi girls,

What about:
"I cry because of you everyday"?

If that conveys the meaning, it sounds better to me.

1 listopad 2008 23:28

pias
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2 listopad 2008 10:38

cristallic
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That works fine.^^ I like it. Or pehaps the past tense will give a more "I'm over you now" feel to it. "I have been crying because of you every day." But in the end we could give examples untill infinity so chose one that you see fit.

2 listopad 2008 10:49

pias
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The source text is in present, so I think the target shall also be ...