Translation - Turkish-English - gözlerim senin için uyanık,ceylan gözlümCurrent status Translation
 This translation request is "Meaning only". | gözlerim senin için uyanık,ceylan gözlüm | | Source language: Turkish Translated by rojberdan
Gözlerim senin için uyanık, ceylan gözlüm. |
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My eyes are wide for you, my gazelle-eyes. | Remarks about the translation | being gazelle-eyed --> having alluring eyes (like a gazelle) |
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12 March 2010 20:51 | | | Hi 44hazal44 
I'm not sure about the word "awake" in this context. I thought maybe the word "wide" might fit better here.
Also, "gazelle eyed" makes the reading a little difficult as it is only an adjective. Would it still work if we put:
"My eyes are wide for you gazelle-eyes"
Let me know
Bises
Tantine | | |
14 March 2010 20:14 | | | Hi Tantine, 
"uyanık" means "awake", that's why I translated it in that way. 
Perhaps we could say "my gazelle-eyed one", if it is not too weird. 
I agree with your version but I think it would rather be a meaning only translation.
If you think we must put the version you gave above, then we should tick the "meaning only" square.
What do you think ? |
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