Translation - Turkish-English - Benim canim aciyor cünkü senin yanin da olmamak...

Hi Lenab,

We'll have to improve that first sentence

Also "watch" would be better as "look at"

Hi!
I agree, the first part sounds a bit odd. I didn't want to leave out the "da" (too), but perhaps it's not needed? Or, there may be another translation for that little word

hummm...What about this?

"My soul also aches for missing your proximity."

Yes, I guess it could be a solution. I'll edit. Thanks!

First line can be better as;
"My soul also aches for not being on your side."

Thanks Merdogan!

Would it be ok to write : "...for not being close to you" ? That way we avoid repeating "your side". What do you think?

Hi lenab
Can be, but we have to wait our lilian before any chancing.

That sounds lighter. I don't know the original words used, but if it is not necessary using a negative form, I guess it would sound more natural to say:

"My soul also aches for being far from you"

CC: merdogan

I agree with lilian

Ok, that sounds fine to me too.

Hi,

that one is accurate, but "also" is needless there.

oki, done!