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Benim canim aciyor cünkü senin yanin da olmamak...
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Wprowadzone przez minna06
Język źródłowy: Turecki

Benim canim aciyor cünkü senin yanin da olmamak her gece resmine bakip öyle yatiyorum sana söz veriyorum yanina gelecegim.

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My soul....
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Angielski

Tłumaczone przez lenab
Język docelowy: Angielski

My soul aches for being far from you. Every night I look at your picture when I go to bed. I promise I'll come by your side.
Ostatnio zatwierdzony albo edytowany przez lilian canale - 17 Grudzień 2008 19:10





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13 Grudzień 2008 23:10

lilian canale
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Hi Lenab,

We'll have to improve that first sentence

Also "watch" would be better as "look at"

14 Grudzień 2008 00:22

lenab
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Hi!
I agree, the first part sounds a bit odd. I didn't want to leave out the "da" (too), but perhaps it's not needed? Or, there may be another translation for that little word

14 Grudzień 2008 00:33

lilian canale
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hummm...What about this?

"My soul also aches for missing your proximity."

17 Grudzień 2008 00:13

lenab
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Yes, I guess it could be a solution. I'll edit. Thanks!

17 Grudzień 2008 10:38

merdogan
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First line can be better as;
"My soul also aches for not being on your side."

17 Grudzień 2008 10:50

lenab
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Thanks Merdogan!

Would it be ok to write : "...for not being close to you" ? That way we avoid repeating "your side". What do you think?

17 Grudzień 2008 12:25

merdogan
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Hi lenab
Can be, but we have to wait our lilian before any chancing.

17 Grudzień 2008 12:31

lilian canale
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That sounds lighter. I don't know the original words used, but if it is not necessary using a negative form, I guess it would sound more natural to say:

"My soul also aches for being far from you"

CC: merdogan

17 Grudzień 2008 14:13

merdogan
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I agree with lilian

17 Grudzień 2008 14:32

lenab
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Ok, that sounds fine to me too.

17 Grudzień 2008 18:26

handyy
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Hi,

that one is accurate, but "also" is needless there.

17 Grudzień 2008 19:08

lenab
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oki, done!