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Natpis	Benim canim aciyor cÃ¼nkÃ¼ senin yanin da olmamak...
Tekst Podnet od minna06	Izvorni jezik: Turski Benim canim aciyor cÃ¼nkÃ¼ senin yanin da olmamak her gece resmine bakip Ã¶yle yatiyorum sana sÃ¶z veriyorum yanina gelecegim.

Natpis	My soul....
Prevod Engleski Preveo lenab	Željeni jezik: Engleski My soul aches for being far from you. Every night I look at your picture when I go to bed. I promise I'll come by your side.

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- 17 Decembar 2008 19:10

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	Autor	Poruka
		13 Decembar 2008 23:10
	lilian canale Broj poruka: 14972	Hi Lenab, We'll have to improve that first sentence Also "watch" would be better as "look at"
		14 Decembar 2008 00:22
	lenab Broj poruka: 1084	Hi! I agree, the first part sounds a bit odd. I didn't want to leave out the "da" (too), but perhaps it's not needed? Or, there may be another translation for that little word
		14 Decembar 2008 00:33
	lilian canale Broj poruka: 14972	hummm...What about this? "My soul also aches for missing your proximity."
		17 Decembar 2008 00:13
	lenab Broj poruka: 1084	Yes, I guess it could be a solution. I'll edit. Thanks!
		17 Decembar 2008 10:38
	merdogan Broj poruka: 3769	First line can be better as; "My soul also aches for not being on your side."
		17 Decembar 2008 10:50
	lenab Broj poruka: 1084	Thanks Merdogan! Would it be ok to write : "...for not being close to you" ? That way we avoid repeating "your side". What do you think?
		17 Decembar 2008 12:25
	merdogan Broj poruka: 3769	Hi lenab Can be, but we have to wait our lilian before any chancing.
		17 Decembar 2008 12:31
	lilian canale Broj poruka: 14972	That sounds lighter. I don't know the original words used, but if it is not necessary using a negative form, I guess it would sound more natural to say: "My soul also aches for being far from you" CC: merdogan
		17 Decembar 2008 14:13
	merdogan Broj poruka: 3769	I agree with lilian
		17 Decembar 2008 14:32
	lenab Broj poruka: 1084	Ok, that sounds fine to me too.
		17 Decembar 2008 18:26
	handyy Broj poruka: 2118	Hi, that one is accurate, but "also" is needless there.
		17 Decembar 2008 19:08
	lenab Broj poruka: 1084	oki, done!