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Translation - Turkish-English - ihlamurlar altinda kar tanesi gibi nazli kuÅŸ...

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ihlamurlar altinda kar tanesi gibi nazli kuÅŸ...
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Submitted by sihemnoualalioua
Source language: Turkish

ihlamurlar altinda

kar tanesi gibi nazli
kuÅŸ kanadi gibi kirik
yar tenine haram deÄŸdi
zamansiz bu ayrilik
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arabe - anglais

Title
Under the linden tree Delicate like a snowflake...
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Translated by turkishmiss
Target language: English

Under the linden tree

Delicate like a snowflake
Broken like a bird’s wing
He felt the beloved's forbidden skin
This separation is untimely
Validated by lilian canale - 20 May 2008 15:26





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18 May 2008 17:28

lilian canale
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Hi miss, nice poem!

"He touched the forbidden skin of the beloved"

This line is a little longer than the others. Could it be:
"He felt his beloved's forbidden skin" with no change in the original meaning?

(Not much shorter, but...)

18 May 2008 17:44

turkishmiss
จำนวนข้อความ: 2132
Of course we can, I do it.
Haram means forbidden by religion, so I have translated as forbidden, do you know a shorter word to express that?

18 May 2008 17:55

lilian canale
จำนวนข้อความ: 14972
for "forbidden" , there isn't a shorter synonym, the only one is "banned" but it usually refers to the law.

20 May 2008 03:23

katranjyly
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yar tenine haram deÄŸdi - could it be "beloved's body became haram (forbidden)? Thanks.