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Translation - Pools-Engels - My na Jego podobieństwo

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Category Poetry

Title
My na Jego podobieństwo
Text
Submitted by Aneta B.
Source language: Pools

On kocha stale
My tylko czasami
Kocha grzeszników
My tylko świętych…

On widzi prawdziwych ludzi…
My tylko ich marne cienie
Gdy mówi szepcze
My najczęściej krzyczymy
Przychodzi przebaczać
My zwykle osądzać…
Jak bardzo się od Niego różnimy
My – na Jego podobieństwo…
Remarks about the translation
Into British English please.

Title
We were made in His image
Translation
Engels

Translated by Lazybug
Target language: Engels

He loves constantly
We only love sometimes
He loves sinners
We only love saints...

He sees real people...
We only see their miserable shadows
He whispers when he speaks
We often shout
He comes to forgive
We usually judge...
How much we differ from Him
We - who were made in His image...
Laaste geakkrediteerde redigering deur lilian canale - 16 Januarie 2014 16:59





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9 Januarie 2014 20:57

Aneta B.
Number of messages: 4487
empty shadows --> miserable shadows?

16 Januarie 2014 13:11

bonta
Number of messages: 218
The only very small comment I would have is to put 'real' instead of 'true', in fifth line.
For the rest it is a good job.