Originele tekst - Engels - My words were rude

Hi buket,
as you said this is meaningless. Could you make better and simplier sentences?

Hi Lilian, I wrote this sentence for learning possesive pronounces, because I confuse them.
What do you suggest?

What about this?

"My words were rude
I learned that from your eyes
Our moments are over
they've lost their brightness"

Really nice, thanks a lot

Buket the first line you left is wrong. Why didn't you remove it?

I want that sentence to be translated Hindi too.

Well...in that case you must make a correct sentence, otherwise it will be really difficult to translate. You can't use the negative form of the verb together with "nobody".

You may make a new request with it alone.

Ok Lilian, I will request it later
Thanks