Vertaling - Italiaans-Engels - AI GENTILI CLIENTI L'USO DELLE POSTAZIONE...

Hi Nadia,

This is OK but:

The word "pleased" should read "please"

Replacing the phrase
"...please leave...as soon as you" by
"...please vacate the internet access once you...

would avoid confusion with the gratuity of the service and is easier to read.

maybe you should prefer:

To remove the initial word "The" and put a capital at "internet"

"... and in the evening until ..." seems a better turn of phrase

"...other people..." could be replaced by "others"

Maybe ths phrase could read:

"If there are others, waiting on the sofas and the chairs, to use it..."

Sorry for nitpicking, since its otherwise very good english

Bises
Tantine

I agree on everything but
"please leave...as soon as you"
"please vacate the internet access once you"
That should be more than a translation, because the Italian text is different:
please finish your work and vacate the internet access.
It is less polite, but it is so in Italian too.

Apple,

You are completely right, the last phrase should be left in its impolite form:

please finish your work and vacate.....

Basgi

The source meaning is station", not "access": access includes wireless, and a port in the wall. Clearly, this is a desk with a computer on it...

I revised the target to be as close as possible to the source.

I think this is ready to approve, but I did not see the initial translation, so I cannot give a rating. Samanthalee, I will leave that to you.

Thank you girls, you're right I had some problems because I didn't know the word use in english for internet "position" I think "access" could be right I don't know if "Station" is better for technical reasons.

I agree with you all...

Person in plural is PEOPLE.

Bye