The Italian text is correct but there are some points to be noticed:
a) In the title: "belloche" --> "bello che";
b) At the beginning of a sentence and after a full stop we use the capital letter;
c) I would have written "God" with a capital too;
d) just a proposal: what about the insertion of a comma between "ti amo" and "amore mio" (and maybe a full stop at the end)?