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הטקסט נגיש בשפות הבאות: איסלנדיתשוודיתאנגליתיוונית

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שם
því er þú fórst þá eitthvað í mér dó Þó allt...
טקסט
נשלח על ידי Ισόλντε
שפת המקור: איסלנדית

því er þú fórst þá eitthvað í mér dó

Þó allt sé eymdarlegt án þín hér

Allt breyttist, kæmir þú til mín hér

Mig langar þig að taka höndum tveim

שם
Because of your leaving, something died inside me.
תרגום
אנגלית

תורגם על ידי pias
שפת המטרה: אנגלית

Because of your leaving, something died inside me.

Everything still seems wretched without you here.

Everything will change if you come to me.

I long for holding your hands.
אושר לאחרונה ע"י lilian canale - 31 אוגוסט 2008 22:01





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29 אוגוסט 2008 15:14

lilian canale
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Hi Pia,

What about:
"Because of your leaving, something died inside me."

"When everything seems wretched without you here."
That is incomplete. Are you sure it's "when"?

"I'm longing to take your both (?) hands."
I'd say: "I miss holding your hands" (I don't think that "both" is necessary since it's understood that we "usually" have two hands )

29 אוגוסט 2008 15:41

pias
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Hello Lilian

"Because of your leaving, something died inside me." is good!

I checked the word "Þó" another time, and maybe it's better to write "Still everything seems wretched ..." ?

Yes, it's more logical to write the way you put it "I miss holding your hands", but the source text is that way (your both hands )....Can one write "I'm longing to take your hands." instead?

29 אוגוסט 2008 16:55

lilian canale
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"Everything still seems wretched without you here" would be fine.

You ask: Can one write "I'm longing to take your hands." instead?

"I long for holding your hands" would be acceptable.
One longs for something and for "hands" we would usually use "hold", that means not only take them but keep them. See what I mean?

29 אוגוסט 2008 18:00

pias
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Yes, I think I understand what you mean.

I'll do the edits now, thank you.

31 אוגוסט 2008 19:44

xamine
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... if you come back to me
should be: "om du kommer tillbaka till mig",
Currently, it says "if you come to me"

... holding your hands.
should be ... "hålla dig i händerna"

31 אוגוסט 2008 19:54

pias
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Tack xamine!

Lilian, he is right about the first thing, is it ok. to write "Everything will change if you will come to me".

?

31 אוגוסט 2008 19:55

pias
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And the cc ...

CC: lilian canale

31 אוגוסט 2008 20:17

lilian canale
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"Everything will change if you come to me" is right, "will come" would be wrong.

31 אוגוסט 2008 20:31

pias
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Ok, thanks. I'll edit!