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Перевод - Исландский -Английский - þvà er þú fórst þá eitthvað à mér dó Þó allt...Текущий статус Перевод
Категория Поэзия | þvà er þú fórst þá eitthvað à mér dó Þó allt... | | Язык, с которого нужно перевести: Исландский
þvà er þú fórst þá eitthvað à mér dó
Þó allt sé eymdarlegt án þÃn hér Allt breyttist, kæmir þú til mÃn hér Mig langar þig að taka höndum tveim |
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| Because of your leaving, something died inside me. | ПереводАнглийский Перевод сделан pias | Язык, на который нужно перевести: Английский
Because of your leaving, something died inside me.
Everything still seems wretched without you here.
Everything will change if you come to me.
I long for holding your hands. |
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Последнее изменение было внесено пользователем lilian canale - 31 Август 2008 22:01
Последнее сообщение | | | | | 29 Август 2008 15:14 | | | Hi Pia,
What about:
"Because of your leaving, something died inside me."
"When everything seems wretched without you here."
That is incomplete. Are you sure it's "when"?
"I'm longing to take your both (?) hands."
I'd say: "I miss holding your hands" (I don't think that "both" is necessary since it's understood that we "usually" have two hands )
| | | 29 Август 2008 15:41 | | piasКол-во сообщений: 8113 | Hello Lilian
"Because of your leaving, something died inside me." is good!
I checked the word "Þó" another time, and maybe it's better to write "Still everything seems wretched ..." ?
Yes, it's more logical to write the way you put it "I miss holding your hands", but the source text is that way (your both hands )....Can one write "I'm longing to take your hands." instead?
| | | 29 Август 2008 16:55 | | | "Everything still seems wretched without you here" would be fine.
You ask: Can one write "I'm longing to take your hands." instead?
"I long for holding your hands" would be acceptable.
One longs for something and for "hands" we would usually use "hold", that means not only take them but keep them. See what I mean? | | | 29 Август 2008 18:00 | | piasКол-во сообщений: 8113 | Yes, I think I understand what you mean.
I'll do the edits now, thank you. | | | 31 Август 2008 19:44 | | | ... if you come back to me should be: "om du kommer tillbaka till mig", Currently, it says "if you come to me"
... holding your hands. should be ... "hÃ¥lla dig i händerna" | | | 31 Август 2008 19:54 | | piasКол-во сообщений: 8113 | Tack xamine!
Lilian, he is right about the first thing, is it ok. to write "Everything will change if you will come to me".
? | | | 31 Август 2008 19:55 | | piasКол-во сообщений: 8113 | | | | 31 Август 2008 20:17 | | | "Everything will change if you come to me" is right, "will come" would be wrong. | | | 31 Август 2008 20:31 | | piasКол-во сообщений: 8113 | |
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