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Μετάφραση - Ισλανδικά-Αγγλικά - þvà er þú fórst þá eitthvað à mér dó Þó allt...Παρούσα κατάσταση Μετάφραση
Κατηγορία Ποίηση | þvà er þú fórst þá eitthvað à mér dó Þó allt... | | Γλώσσα πηγής: Ισλανδικά
þvà er þú fórst þá eitthvað à mér dó
Þó allt sé eymdarlegt án þÃn hér Allt breyttist, kæmir þú til mÃn hér Mig langar þig að taka höndum tveim |
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| Because of your leaving, something died inside me. | ΜετάφρασηΑγγλικά Μεταφράστηκε από pias | Γλώσσα προορισμού: Αγγλικά
Because of your leaving, something died inside me.
Everything still seems wretched without you here.
Everything will change if you come to me.
I long for holding your hands. |
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Τελευταία επικύρωση ή επεξεργασία από lilian canale - 31 Αύγουστος 2008 22:01
Τελευταία μηνύματα | | | | | 29 Αύγουστος 2008 15:14 | | | Hi Pia,
What about:
"Because of your leaving, something died inside me."
"When everything seems wretched without you here."
That is incomplete. Are you sure it's "when"?
"I'm longing to take your both (?) hands."
I'd say: "I miss holding your hands" (I don't think that "both" is necessary since it's understood that we "usually" have two hands )
| | | 29 Αύγουστος 2008 15:41 | | piasΑριθμός μηνυμάτων: 8113 | Hello Lilian
"Because of your leaving, something died inside me." is good!
I checked the word "Þó" another time, and maybe it's better to write "Still everything seems wretched ..." ?
Yes, it's more logical to write the way you put it "I miss holding your hands", but the source text is that way (your both hands )....Can one write "I'm longing to take your hands." instead?
| | | 29 Αύγουστος 2008 16:55 | | | "Everything still seems wretched without you here" would be fine.
You ask: Can one write "I'm longing to take your hands." instead?
"I long for holding your hands" would be acceptable.
One longs for something and for "hands" we would usually use "hold", that means not only take them but keep them. See what I mean? | | | 29 Αύγουστος 2008 18:00 | | piasΑριθμός μηνυμάτων: 8113 | Yes, I think I understand what you mean.
I'll do the edits now, thank you. | | | 31 Αύγουστος 2008 19:44 | | | ... if you come back to me should be: "om du kommer tillbaka till mig", Currently, it says "if you come to me"
... holding your hands. should be ... "hÃ¥lla dig i händerna" | | | 31 Αύγουστος 2008 19:54 | | piasΑριθμός μηνυμάτων: 8113 | Tack xamine!
Lilian, he is right about the first thing, is it ok. to write "Everything will change if you will come to me".
? | | | 31 Αύγουστος 2008 19:55 | | piasΑριθμός μηνυμάτων: 8113 | | | | 31 Αύγουστος 2008 20:17 | | | "Everything will change if you come to me" is right, "will come" would be wrong. | | | 31 Αύγουστος 2008 20:31 | | piasΑριθμός μηνυμάτων: 8113 | |
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