תרגום - דנית-אנגלית - Jeg vil lære dit sprog hvis du vil give dig tid...

if you will take the time to teach me. your culture, your country, your childhood (ikke "and"

Agree, that's closer to the original, even if this is a MO. Thank you!

May I edit --> "if you will take the time to teach me." ?

CC: lilian canale

I think the second sentence is a bit too.. direct.
Maybe add a ", please." at the end?