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Prevođenje - Njemački-Engleski - Der Kerzen Schein...

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Naslov	Der Kerzen Schein...
Tekst Poslao MarÃa17	Izvorni jezik: Njemački Der Kerzen Schein Er leuchtet fahl Als das Sonnenlicht er stahl Und nur das gro_e Himmelszelt Bezeugt das Ende dieser Welt Des Mondes Schein Er leuchtet fahl Das Herz der Finsternis er stahl Nun glei_end Lichte ihn umgibt Und doch des Menschen Hoffnung siegt...?
Primjedbe o prijevodu	Any English... :)

Naslov	The candlelight...
Prevođenje Engleski Preveo Urunghai	Ciljni jezik: Engleski The candlelight It's shining faintly When he stole the sunlight And only the great canopy bears witness to the end of this world The moonlight It's shining faintly The heart of darkness he stole Now twinkling light surrounds him And still people's hope triumphs...?
Primjedbe o prijevodu	I don't know if the light is meant with "er" (possible), if it is, "he/him" should be replaced with "it".

Posljednji potvrdio i uredio dramati - 3 siječanj 2008 14:00

Najnovije poruke

	Autor/ica	Poruka
		3 siječanj 2008 10:19
	iamfromaustria Broj poruka: 1335	"Als das Sonnenlicht er stahl" would be "When he (it) stole the sunlight" Instead of "sky" (4th line) I'd say "canopy" - it's more poetic. "The moonlight" for "Des Mondes Schein" is of course correct as regards content, but I'd say "The glow/shine of the moon" (even more precise). Same with the last sentence, "And still, the people's/men's hope triumphs" (because it is genitive in German). Sorry if I'm a bit meticulous
		3 siječanj 2008 10:57
	Urunghai Broj poruka: 464	You're not meticulous at all (well, maybe a bit, but it's for the best ) Thanks for the advice! German poetry just isn't my thing
		3 siječanj 2008 12:28
	iamfromaustria Broj poruka: 1335	You're welcome, it's just that we've holidays right now, which means I've got a lot of time to be meticulous :P Normally, my perfectionism is held under control by the lack of time...