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翻译 - 德语-英语 - Der Kerzen Schein...

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标题	Der Kerzen Schein...
正文提交 MarÃa17	源语言: 德语 Der Kerzen Schein Er leuchtet fahl Als das Sonnenlicht er stahl Und nur das gro_e Himmelszelt Bezeugt das Ende dieser Welt Des Mondes Schein Er leuchtet fahl Das Herz der Finsternis er stahl Nun glei_end Lichte ihn umgibt Und doch des Menschen Hoffnung siegt...?
给这篇翻译加备注	Any English... :)

标题	The candlelight...
翻译英语翻译 Urunghai	目的语言: 英语 The candlelight It's shining faintly When he stole the sunlight And only the great canopy bears witness to the end of this world The moonlight It's shining faintly The heart of darkness he stole Now twinkling light surrounds him And still people's hope triumphs...?
给这篇翻译加备注	I don't know if the light is meant with "er" (possible), if it is, "he/him" should be replaced with "it".

由dramati认可或编辑 - 2008年一月 3日 14:00

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		2008年一月 3日 10:19
	iamfromaustria 文章总计: 1335	"Als das Sonnenlicht er stahl" would be "When he (it) stole the sunlight" Instead of "sky" (4th line) I'd say "canopy" - it's more poetic. "The moonlight" for "Des Mondes Schein" is of course correct as regards content, but I'd say "The glow/shine of the moon" (even more precise). Same with the last sentence, "And still, the people's/men's hope triumphs" (because it is genitive in German). Sorry if I'm a bit meticulous
		2008年一月 3日 10:57
	Urunghai 文章总计: 464	You're not meticulous at all (well, maybe a bit, but it's for the best ) Thanks for the advice! German poetry just isn't my thing
		2008年一月 3日 12:28
	iamfromaustria 文章总计: 1335	You're welcome, it's just that we've holidays right now, which means I've got a lot of time to be meticulous :P Normally, my perfectionism is held under control by the lack of time...