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Translation - Portuguese brazilian-English - O homem invisível

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กลุ่ม Poetry - Humor

Title
O homem invisível
Text
Submitted by stevz
Source language: Portuguese brazilian

O homem invisível
fura fila no supermercado,
mas seu cartão de crédito
nunca funciona.
O homem invisível
só anda pelado,
mas não pega bronzeado.
O homem invisível
perdeu o antídoto
e não consegue se encontrar...
Remarks about the translation
Alguém poderia me ajudar a traduzir de forma "fluida" e razoavelmente métrica?
O original não rima mesmo.
É algo bem coloquial.
Desde já, obrigado!

Title
The invisible man
Translation
English

Translated by lilian canale
Target language: English

The invisible man
jumps the queue at the shop,
but his credit card
doesn't ever work
The invisible man
only goes naked,
but he never gets a suntan
The invisible man
has lost the antidote
and can't find himself...
Remarks about the translation
Hard to get some metric. The textual translation would be:

The invisible man
jumps the queue in the supermarket
but his credit card
never works
The invisible man
only goes naked
but he doesn't get a suntan
The invisible man
has lost the antidote
and doesn't manage to find himself..."
Validated by Francky5591 - 18 September 2008 01:00





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16 September 2008 18:20

goncin
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Why not "mall"?

16 September 2008 19:02

stevz
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thank you!

16 September 2008 19:12

lilian canale
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"mall" is not a supermarket. It is a group of commercial establishments, like a shopping center.