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Ο Δήμαρχος του Δήμου Ιαλυσού πιστοποιεί ότι: Ο...
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Submitted by Vikol
Source language: Greek

Ο Δήμαρχος του Δήμου Ιαλυσού πιστοποιεί ότι:
Ο κατώθι δημότης είναι εγγεγραμμένος στο Δημοτολόγιο του Δήμου Ιαλυσού, στην 1464 (πρώην 1464) οικογενειακή μερίδα του Δημοτολόγιου και σειρά 4 (πρώην 4), με κατώθι στοιχεία:

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The Mayor of Ialissos cerifies that:...
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Target language: English

The Mayor of Ialissos Municipality certifies that:
The below-mentioned citizen is registered in the Municipal Roll of Municipality of Ialissos, under the family entry number 1464 (former 1464) and (member entry/) order number 4 (former 4), with the following particulars:..."
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and his registration bears the following particulars:..."
Validated by User10 - 17 Tháng 12 2010 21:35





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16 Tháng 12 2010 18:26

User10
Tổng số bài gửi: 1173
Hi!

I'd like to suggest some changes: "The Mayor of Ialissos Municipality certifies that:
The below-mentioned citizen is registered in the Municipal Roll of Municipality of Ialissos, under the family entry number 1464 (former 1464) and (member entry/) order number 4 (former 4) of the Municipal Roll, (and his registration bears/) with the following particulars:..."

What do you think?

17 Tháng 12 2010 08:59

bouboukaki
Tổng số bài gửi: 93
Hi!
I think all your changes are acceptable and improve the translation, but I wouldn't add the final "..of the Municipal Roll", because it semms to me it is repeated too many times in the sentence. Other than that, it's perfect!
Thank you!