原稿 - 英語 - Now you're in Heaven, smiling down.

Admins, is this acceptable?

The correct way it reads must be "Now you're in Heaven, smiling down", we do not accept texts that are wrongly typed anyway. And I'm even wondering whether "smiling down" does not need anything else, eg : "smiling down to us..."

But "know" instead of "now" is not acceptable, neither is "your" (possessive) instead of "you're".