Vertimas - Bosnių-Švedų - tako treba nista novo i opet mi je gledala

Hej Edyta!

Jag skulle tro att följande ändringar i ordföljd mm skulle göra texten bättre:

Så måste DET bli


och...

hon tittade igen

eller:

Ã¥terigen tittade hon

Jag har rättat, tack för hjälpen!

Superbra!

Hello fikomix!

I need some help for the evaluation of a translation.
Does the text in this translation mean
"it has to become like that
nothing new
she looked again"
?

If the meaning is similar to what I wrote, please tell what should be different!
Hope you can help me.

CC: fikomix

We have got more votes! lapamato, what do you think could be made better in this translation?

No answer from fikomix or lapato and now we have three people who thinnk this translation looks fine. Now I accept it!