Oversættelse - Italiensk-Engelsk - Desidero il tuo bacioAktuel status Oversættelse
Kategori Poesi - Kærlighed / Venskab  For denne oversættelse bedes om "kun betydning". | | | Sprog, der skal oversættes fra: Italiensk
Desidero il tuo bacio
come la ruota del mulino
attende l'acqua. | Bemærkninger til oversættelsen | Haiku in italiano.
Tema: amore.
Caratteristiche: 3 versi, una similitudine.
Tradurre in inglese (Inghilterra). |
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| | | Sproget, der skal oversættes til: Engelsk
I desire your kiss
just like the wheel of a mill
waits for the water |
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Senest valideret eller redigeret af lilian canale - 13 Maj 2011 16:19
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13 Maj 2011 14:37 | | | Hi Alex,
I see that the Italian version didn't take into account the traditional (or most usual) structure of a haiku that is 3 lines containing 5 syllables in the first and third lines and 7 syllables in the second. Since that is possible to abtain in English without changing the meaning of the original in Italian, I'd suggest:
I desire your kiss
just like the wheel of a mill
waits for the water
What do you think?  | | |
13 Maj 2011 16:09 | | | Well, that's great! Thank you   |
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