अनुबाद - इतालियन-अंग्रेजी - Desidero il tuo bacioअहिलेको अवस्था अनुबाद
Category Poetry - Love / Friendship  This translation request is "Meaning only". | | | स्रोत भाषा: इतालियन
Desidero il tuo bacio
come la ruota del mulino
attende l'acqua. | अनुबादका लागि चाहिन सक्ने थप जानकारी | Haiku in italiano.
Tema: amore.
Caratteristiche: 3 versi, una similitudine.
Tradurre in inglese (Inghilterra). |
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 alexfattद्वारा अनुबाद गरिएको | अनुबाद गर्नुपर्ने भाषा: अंग्रेजी
I desire your kiss
just like the wheel of a mill
waits for the water |
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पछिल्ला सन्देशहरु | | | | |
2011年 मे 13日 14:37 | | | Hi Alex,
I see that the Italian version didn't take into account the traditional (or most usual) structure of a haiku that is 3 lines containing 5 syllables in the first and third lines and 7 syllables in the second. Since that is possible to abtain in English without changing the meaning of the original in Italian, I'd suggest:
I desire your kiss
just like the wheel of a mill
waits for the water
What do you think?  | | |
2011年 मे 13日 16:09 | | | Well, that's great! Thank you   |
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- 2011年 मे 13日 16:19
