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Kategorio Kanto - Komerco / Postenoj | vodi me iz neistine u istinu vodi me iz tame u... | | Font-lingvo: Kroata
vodi me iz neistine u istinu
vodi me iz tame u svjetlost
vodi me iz smrti u besmrtnost |
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| | | Cel-lingvo: Angla
Take me from falsehood to truth.
Take me from darkness to light.
Take me from death to immortality. | | Take me from lie to truth.
Take me from dark to light.
Take me from death to immortality. |
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Laste validigita aŭ redaktita de kafetzou - 9 Aprilo 2008 17:07
Lasta Afiŝo | | | | |
5 Aprilo 2008 08:13 | | | Too many "the"s - they can all come out, in my opinion. | | |
9 Aprilo 2008 01:45 | | | Hi maki_sindja, Kafetzou is right, we don't need so many articles.
What about:
Take me from falsehood to truth.
Take me from darkness to brightness.
Take me from death to immortality.
What do you think? 
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9 Aprilo 2008 06:50 | | | | | |
9 Aprilo 2008 11:06 | | | Yes, Kafetzou, I like it better, I just didn't want to change more words than necessary in maki's translation, but if she agrees we can use "light"  instead of "brightness".
What do you say, maki? | | |
9 Aprilo 2008 17:05 | | | Maki says OK!
And thanks! |
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