Ciao come va? qui tutto ok spero anche a voi mi sono registrato su my space per cercarti ma non ti ho trovato forse perchè non sono bravo spero la tua mail sia giusta saluta Sofie e i bambini a presto.
Hello, how are you? Everything is fine here, I hope you are fine too. I signed up on "my space" to look for you but I have not found you perhaps because I'm not good. I hope your email is right. Regards to Sofie and the children. See you soon.
Just only a word could be missing: "perhaps" or "maybe" in the sentence "...because I am not good...". Apart from this the translation seems to be quite correct