Höjer volymen och Gordons Ganos starka röst släpps ut i rummet och övertar hela verkligheten.Er musik förgyller mina öron på ett så mästerligt och magiskt sett.Era texter och musik berör så innerligt att det får hela världen att stanna.Det svartvita blir till färg och det tonlösa blir till vackra toner.Tack för allt magiskt ni delar med er av
I turn up the volume and Gordons Gano's strong voice spreads out into the room and takes over the whole reality. Your music cheers up my ears in a brilliant and magic way. Your lyrics and music touch so deeply that make the whole world stop. The black and white turn into colours and the loose sounds become beautiful tones. Thank you for all the magic you share with us.
Validated by lilian canale - 2008年 सेप्टेम्बर 24日 02:13
This is not an easy text. I'd suggest a few small changes in vocabulary in order to sound better in English.
"I turn up the volume and Gordons Gano's strong voice spreads out into the room and takes over the whole reality. Your music cheers up my ears in a brillant and magic way. Your lyrics and music touch so deeply that make the whole world stop. The black and white turn into colours and the loose sounds become beautiful tones. Thank you for all the magic you share with us."
Do these changes interfer in the original meaning?
No, it makes it better! Actually there are some "not so perfect" expressions in the swedish text. But your suggestion perfectly keeps the meaning of the text! I'll edit!
Well, it means that the tones are without strength, but perhaps "flat sounds" would be even better? I had voiceless (as a noun) first, but I found Lilian's suggestion better.