Перевод - Английский-Японский - Hope Hiroshima and Nagasaki incidents don't...

Hi Mihail,
Could you do me a favor and check the Japanese version above, please?
I want it to be absolutely perfect...

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Very sorry for reacting your message tooo late...
I think it is too late to answer but i would like to respond.

I think Ziken will not be suitable for this context...Sanji(惨事) or Dai-sanji(大惨事) is more suitable.
For japanese people,ziken sounds like case,for example,murder,robbery,assalt in bank...etc.


We,japanese do not consider Hiroshima and Nagasaki incident as Ziken,because incidents happend in war is more serious than any other cases.

If someone japanese see this translation in shrine,everybody do not understand 広島・長崎の事件 is 広島・長崎の大惨事 at a glance.

I am japanese,so i feel this translation must be corrected.

Thanks, Mihail! I've corrected it according to your recommendation!

Megil-sensei,very sorry for saying rudely if you feel bad.Your japanese is almost perfect,but i would like to help your japanese more perfect.

Not at all, Mihail: I always appreciate your help and feedback!
Have a nice day!