Dịch - Italian-English - Desidero il tuo bacioCurrent status Dịch
Nhóm chuyên mục Poetry - Love / Friendship ![](../images/note.gif) This translation request is "Meaning only". | | | Source language: Italian
Desidero il tuo bacio come la ruota del mulino attende l'acqua. | Remarks about the translation | Haiku in italiano. Tema: amore. Caratteristiche: 3 versi, una similitudine. Tradurre in inglese (Inghilterra). |
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I desire your kiss just like the wheel of a mill waits for the water |
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Bài gửi sau cùng | | | | | 13 Tháng 5 2011 14:37 | | | Hi Alex,
I see that the Italian version didn't take into account the traditional (or most usual) structure of a haiku that is 3 lines containing 5 syllables in the first and third lines and 7 syllables in the second. Since that is possible to abtain in English without changing the meaning of the original in Italian, I'd suggest:
I desire your kiss
just like the wheel of a mill
waits for the water
What do you think? ![](../images/emo/smile.png) | | | 13 Tháng 5 2011 16:09 | | | Well, that's great! Thank you ![](../images/wm_act1.png) |
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