Vertimas - Ispanų-Olandų - No quiero estar sin ti Si tu no estas aqui me...

Hi Isildur

No votes here

Could you help me evaluate please? My translation says

Without you I don't want to be (=exist)
When you are not here, the air is too much for me (explained in the remarks: I don't need any air, I don't want to live anymore)
I don't want to be like this
When you are not here, everybody becomes nobody (explained in the remarks: nobody exists for me anymore, I feel alone even if there are people nearby)

Thanks!

CC: Isildur__

No quiero estar sin ti
Si tu no estás aquí, me sobra el aire
No quiero estar así
Si tu no estás, la gente se hace nadie.

It was correct, just some punctuation details

Thank you!