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Category Expression - Arts / Creativity / Imagination | ç§ã¯ãŠã‚‚ã¡ã‚ƒã®æ¯è»Šã§å‹•ã„ã¦ã„ã¾ã™ã€‚ | | Source language: Japanese
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I am a toy that uses gears to move. | Remarks about the translation | A slightly more anthropomorphic version:
I am a toy who uses a cogwheel to move.
Adding "Who" makes the toy seem more like a person.
Cogwheel makes it sound a little more old-fashioned.
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Last validated or edited by Lein - 25 June 2013 15:10
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23 April 2013 16:37 | | 
LeinNumber of messages: 3389 | Hello Ian,
I have one negative vote and have asked for motivation, but I have not had a reply. Could you help? Is this translation ok? If not, what is wrong with it? Thanks! CC: IanMegill2 | | |
18 June 2013 18:22 | | | No. I would suggest " I am a toy that uses gear to move." or simply " I use gears to move. " |
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