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Translation - Turkish-English - ben sevdanın oturduğu sokakta oturuyorum geceler...

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ben sevdanın oturduğu sokakta oturuyorum geceler...
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Submitted by megaboy006
Source language: Turkish

ben sevdanın oturduğu sokakta oturuyorum
geceler hiç bitmiyor ben hiç uyumuyorum
gecenin efkarı iniyor perde perde
sevdanın hayali vuruyor arada bir içime
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ibrahim sadrinin bir şiiridir çok seviyorum ingilizcesi eğer olursa bunu türkiye dışındaki yabancı arkadaşlara göndermek istiyorum.

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ach ach ach
Translation
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Translated by kfeto
Target language: English

I live in the street where passion resides.
The nights never end, I never sleep.
The sorrow of the night descends like a curtain.
A passion-induced vision occasionally takes over my heart.
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i took some liberties to come up with a decent english text
Validated by kafetzou - 18 July 2008 03:25





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16 July 2008 22:09

lilian canale
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Hi kfeto,

"The night's sorrow " should be "the night sorrow" or "the sorrow of the night"

Which one do you like better?
And perhaps you should omit "the" before "nights" in the second line.

The rest is fine to me.

17 July 2008 03:54

Rise
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Excellent

17 July 2008 07:46

kafetzou
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Maybe "vision" would be better than "dream".

17 July 2008 12:46

kfeto
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it's been approved so you or lilian should change it.

18 July 2008 03:26

kafetzou
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OK - I did.