My love I don't know what's wrong with the phone. I love you like crazy my darling. And don't worry. You, love, are my whole world.
Pastabos apie vertimą
vita, anima are words that lovers may say between them (also a mum towards her kid) --- Literally: My life I don't know what's wrong with the phone. I love you crazily my soul. And don't worry. You, life, are my world. -- Ian
My love I don't know what's up with the phone. I love you like crazy my darling. And don't worry. You, love, are my whole world.
And then we can mention in the Remarks under the translation that "love" is literally "life" and "darling" is literally "soul."
The problem is it just feels too unnatural to use the literal translations from the Italian in English...
Also,
what's up with the phone
means
what's wrong with the phone
i.e. what the matter is with the phone?
Or is there another meaning to it?
Hmmm...
Hmmm...Yeah, it's always a judgement call...
But I guess you'd usually be pretty safe if you put as-close-to-the-original-as-possible natural target language in the Translation box, and then put the literal meaning of the text in the Remarks box...?
Anyway, I'll edit the text and put it to a vote! Thanks!
Original form of translation before editing:
My life I don't know what's up with the phone. I love you like crazy my soul. And don't worry. You, life, you are my whole world