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Titul	I ja se takodje osjecam lose.Svaki dan mi sve...
Text Pridal(a) chekirov	Zdrojový jazyk: Bosenština I ja se takodje osjecam lose.Svaki dan mi sve vise nedostajes.Nedostaje mi tvoj lik,osmijeh,tvoji poljupci,dodiri,poruke za laku noc...Duso zelim da te razveselim.Jos ne znam kako ali obecavam da cu nesto smisliti...Jer kad si ti lose i ja sam onda jos vise tuzna...Ali drzi me to sto ne znam sta sutra donosi.Mozda mi donese tebe...

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I am also feeling bad

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Anglicky

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Gaga_86

Cieľový jazyk: Anglicky

I am also feeling bad! I miss you more and more every day! I miss your face, smile, kisses, touch, messages of good night... Honey, I want to cheer you up. I still don't know how, but I promise I will think of something... Because when you feel bad, I feel even worse... But what holds me in life is that I don't know what tomorrow will bring. Maybe it will bring you to me...

Nakoniec potvrdené alebo vydané lilian canale

- 24 marca 2009 23:45

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	Autor	Príspevok
		21 marca 2009 14:52
	lilian canale Počet príspevkov: 14972	Hi Gaga_86, Please check your translation. There are some misspellings to be corrected.
		23 marca 2009 20:52
	Gaga_86 Počet príspevkov: 34	I checked it! And correct mistakes that I found! I hope that's it...
		23 marca 2009 21:57
	lilian canale Počet príspevkov: 14972	I've made some corrections and set a poll. OK?
		23 marca 2009 21:59
	Gaga_86 Počet príspevkov: 34	Ok, thank you very much!
		24 marca 2009 20:07
	maki_sindja Počet príspevkov: 1206	Hi Gaga, Here are just some minor corrections: "I miss your face, smile, your kisses, touches, messages for good night... Honey, I want to cheer you up." I'm not sure if we could say "...when you are bad..." or it should be "...when you are feeling bad...". What do you think, Lilian?
		24 marca 2009 21:45
	Gaga_86 Počet príspevkov: 34	Thanks, Maki! I wrote "messages for good night", but Lilian corrected it! I think it can be "when you are bad...", but we will wait to hear what Lilian says!
		24 marca 2009 22:55
	lilian canale Počet príspevkov: 14972	Hi girls Actually, "Because when you are bad, I am even sadder" would not be the most usual wording in English. I'd say: "(Because)(Since) when you feel bad I feel even worse" or something like: "Your being bad makes me feel even worse" About "Honey, I want you to be happy" or "Honey, I want to cheer you up", both are grammatically correct. We have to keep the most accurate.
		24 marca 2009 23:02
	Gaga_86 Počet príspevkov: 34	Thanks, Lilian, once again! So, it can be "Because when you feel bad I feel even worse", better then that what I wrote If it can stay "Honey, I want you to be happy", I'd choose this one!
		24 marca 2009 23:28
	maki_sindja Počet príspevkov: 1206	I agree with you, Gaga. ("Because when you feel bad I feel even worse" ) But I think "Honey, I want to cheer you up" matches the original more than "Honey, I want you to be happy".
		24 marca 2009 23:35
	Gaga_86 Počet príspevkov: 34	Yes, I think now that too! Thanks Maki a lot! That's better to choose!
		24 marca 2009 23:38
	lilian canale Počet príspevkov: 14972	What is the correct translation for "razveselim"?
		24 marca 2009 23:41
	Gaga_86 Počet príspevkov: 34	"razveseliti" - "cheer up"
		24 marca 2009 23:44
	lilian canale Počet príspevkov: 14972	Oh..so Maki is right. I'll edit that Thanks Maki
		24 marca 2009 23:58
	maki_sindja Počet príspevkov: 1206	You're welcome. I'm glad I could help.