Translation - Bosnian-English - I ja se takodje osjecam lose.Svaki dan mi sve...

Hi Gaga_86,
Please check your translation. There are some misspellings to be corrected.

I checked it! And correct mistakes that I found! I hope that's it...

I've made some corrections and set a poll. OK?

Ok, thank you very much!

Hi Gaga,
Here are just some minor corrections:

"I miss your face, smile, your kisses, touches, messages for good night... Honey, I want to cheer you up."

I'm not sure if we could say "...when you are bad..." or it should be "...when you are feeling bad...". What do you think, Lilian?

Thanks, Maki! I wrote "messages for good night", but Lilian corrected it!

I think it can be "when you are bad...", but we will wait to hear what Lilian says!

Hi girls

Actually, "Because when you are bad, I am even sadder" would not be the most usual wording in English.
I'd say: "(Because)(Since) when you feel bad I feel even worse" or something like: "Your being bad makes me feel even worse"

About "Honey, I want you to be happy" or "Honey, I want to cheer you up", both are grammatically correct. We have to keep the most accurate.

Thanks, Lilian, once again!

So, it can be "Because when you feel bad I feel even worse", better then that what I wrote

If it can stay "Honey, I want you to be happy", I'd choose this one!

I agree with you, Gaga. ("Because when you feel bad I feel even worse" )
But I think "Honey, I want to cheer you up" matches the original more than "Honey, I want you to be happy".

Yes, I think now that too! Thanks Maki a lot! That's better to choose!

What is the correct translation for "razveselim"?

"razveseliti" - "cheer up"

Oh..so Maki is right. I'll edit that
Thanks Maki

You're welcome.
I'm glad I could help.