翻译 - 波斯尼亚语-英语 - I ja se takodje osjecam lose.Svaki dan mi sve...

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标题	I ja se takodje osjecam lose.Svaki dan mi sve...
正文提交 chekirov	源语言: 波斯尼亚语 I ja se takodje osjecam lose.Svaki dan mi sve vise nedostajes.Nedostaje mi tvoj lik,osmijeh,tvoji poljupci,dodiri,poruke za laku noc...Duso zelim da te razveselim.Jos ne znam kako ali obecavam da cu nesto smisliti...Jer kad si ti lose i ja sam onda jos vise tuzna...Ali drzi me to sto ne znam sta sutra donosi.Mozda mi donese tebe...

标题	I am also feeling bad
翻译英语翻译 Gaga_86	目的语言: 英语 I am also feeling bad! I miss you more and more every day! I miss your face, smile, kisses, touch, messages of good night... Honey, I want to cheer you up. I still don't know how, but I promise I will think of something... Because when you feel bad, I feel even worse... But what holds me in life is that I don't know what tomorrow will bring. Maybe it will bring you to me...

由lilian canale

认可或编辑 - 2009年三月 24日 23:45

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		2009年三月 21日 14:52
	lilian canale 文章总计: 14972	Hi Gaga_86, Please check your translation. There are some misspellings to be corrected.
		2009年三月 23日 20:52
	Gaga_86 文章总计: 34	I checked it! And correct mistakes that I found! I hope that's it...
		2009年三月 23日 21:57
	lilian canale 文章总计: 14972	I've made some corrections and set a poll. OK?
		2009年三月 23日 21:59
	Gaga_86 文章总计: 34	Ok, thank you very much!
		2009年三月 24日 20:07
	maki_sindja 文章总计: 1206	Hi Gaga, Here are just some minor corrections: "I miss your face, smile, your kisses, touches, messages for good night... Honey, I want to cheer you up." I'm not sure if we could say "...when you are bad..." or it should be "...when you are feeling bad...". What do you think, Lilian?
		2009年三月 24日 21:45
	Gaga_86 文章总计: 34	Thanks, Maki! I wrote "messages for good night", but Lilian corrected it! I think it can be "when you are bad...", but we will wait to hear what Lilian says!
		2009年三月 24日 22:55
	lilian canale 文章总计: 14972	Hi girls Actually, "Because when you are bad, I am even sadder" would not be the most usual wording in English. I'd say: "(Because)(Since) when you feel bad I feel even worse" or something like: "Your being bad makes me feel even worse" About "Honey, I want you to be happy" or "Honey, I want to cheer you up", both are grammatically correct. We have to keep the most accurate.
		2009年三月 24日 23:02
	Gaga_86 文章总计: 34	Thanks, Lilian, once again! So, it can be "Because when you feel bad I feel even worse", better then that what I wrote If it can stay "Honey, I want you to be happy", I'd choose this one!
		2009年三月 24日 23:28
	maki_sindja 文章总计: 1206	I agree with you, Gaga. ("Because when you feel bad I feel even worse" ) But I think "Honey, I want to cheer you up" matches the original more than "Honey, I want you to be happy".
		2009年三月 24日 23:35
	Gaga_86 文章总计: 34	Yes, I think now that too! Thanks Maki a lot! That's better to choose!
		2009年三月 24日 23:38
	lilian canale 文章总计: 14972	What is the correct translation for "razveselim"?
		2009年三月 24日 23:41
	Gaga_86 文章总计: 34	"razveseliti" - "cheer up"
		2009年三月 24日 23:44
	lilian canale 文章总计: 14972	Oh..so Maki is right. I'll edit that Thanks Maki
		2009年三月 24日 23:58
	maki_sindja 文章总计: 1206	You're welcome. I'm glad I could help.