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| | 31 Enero 2008 06:51 |
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| | 31 Enero 2008 08:33 |
| | Има ÑмиÑлова грешка в първото изречение от текÑта, неразбиране на дума и нÑкой дребни граматичеÑки. |
| | 31 Enero 2008 09:07 |
| NekoCantidad de envíos: 72 | "Unbekannter" is wrong, has to be "Herzallerliebster" + there are many grammatical mistakes, so, in my opinion, the translation isn't good |
| | 31 Enero 2008 09:17 |
| | "ненаглÑдный" ist nicht Unbekannter. Alles andere ist o.k. |
| | 31 Enero 2008 15:43 |
| | I honestly don't see any grammatical mistakes.
So, how should "Unbekannter" be replaced? "Herzallerliebster" sounds a bit old-fashioned... Would the english meaning be "darling"?
@ trolletje: Could you please tell us your opinion in English (or could anyone translate what she's said?) CC: Garret trolletje Neko |
| | 1 Febrero 2008 09:41 |
| NekoCantidad de envíos: 72 | Ok, in place of "Herzallerliebster" can be written "Liebster", both mean "darling". Grammar.. :
(..)wie ich dich kennen gelernt habe -- sounds besser as "als welchen.."
Ich liebe, küsse und vermisse dich -- sounds also better.
Imho.
If I understand right, trolletje wrote that in first sentence is a mistake, is not understandable and grammatically false. |
| | 1 Febrero 2008 10:28 |
| | "ненаглÑдный" - when you can't keep your eyes away from somebody.In Geman I think : Freude meiner Augen |
| | 1 Febrero 2008 14:45 |
| | I changed the second sentence (Ich liebe, küsse...), but the first one sounds better the way it is ("als welchen" .
So, we already got the proposal "Herzallerliebster", "Liebster" and "Augenweide" (the equivalent to "Freude meiner Augen", although I have to admit, that it doesn't sound very good in this place... It's normally not used in direct speech, you can only say "Er ist eine wahre Augenweide" when talking about a special person, imo). |
| | 2 Febrero 2008 20:18 |
| | Unbekannter kelimesi canımın için değil meçhul olması gerekir . |
| | 2 Febrero 2008 23:10 |
| | Unbekannter- Ñто переводитÑÑ ÐºÐ°Ðº незнакомец |
| | 5 Febrero 2008 07:41 |
| | I think Herzallerliebster is best
"ÐенаглÑдный" is also thery old word in russian. |
| | 5 Febrero 2008 16:10 |
| | Thanks, I'll change it and put it out on vote again I hope the rest of the text is okay. |