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Unbekannter ist falsch

Има смислова грешка в първото изречение от текста, неразбиране на дума и някой дребни граматически.

"Unbekannter" is wrong, has to be "Herzallerliebster" + there are many grammatical mistakes, so, in my opinion, the translation isn't good

"ненаглядный" ist nicht Unbekannter. Alles andere ist o.k.

I honestly don't see any grammatical mistakes.
So, how should "Unbekannter" be replaced? "Herzallerliebster" sounds a bit old-fashioned... Would the english meaning be "darling"?

@ trolletje: Could you please tell us your opinion in English (or could anyone translate what she's said?)

CC: Garret trolletje Neko

Ok, in place of "Herzallerliebster" can be written "Liebster", both mean "darling". Grammar.. :
(..)wie ich dich kennen gelernt habe -- sounds besser as "als welchen.."
Ich liebe, küsse und vermisse dich -- sounds also better.
Imho.

If I understand right, trolletje wrote that in first sentence is a mistake, is not understandable and grammatically false.

"ненаглядный" - when you can't keep your eyes away from somebody.In Geman I think : Freude meiner Augen

I changed the second sentence (Ich liebe, küsse...), but the first one sounds better the way it is ("als welchen".

So, we already got the proposal "Herzallerliebster", "Liebster" and "Augenweide" (the equivalent to "Freude meiner Augen", although I have to admit, that it doesn't sound very good in this place... It's normally not used in direct speech, you can only say "Er ist eine wahre Augenweide" when talking about a special person, imo).

Unbekannter kelimesi canımın için değil meçhul olması gerekir .

Unbekannter- это переводится как незнакомец

I think Herzallerliebster is best
"Ненаглядный" is also thery old word in russian.

Thanks, I'll change it and put it out on vote again I hope the rest of the text is okay.