Translation - Bosnian-English - I ja se takodje osjecam lose.Svaki dan mi sve...

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Title	I ja se takodje osjecam lose.Svaki dan mi sve...
Text Submitted by chekirov	Source language: Bosnian I ja se takodje osjecam lose.Svaki dan mi sve vise nedostajes.Nedostaje mi tvoj lik,osmijeh,tvoji poljupci,dodiri,poruke za laku noc...Duso zelim da te razveselim.Jos ne znam kako ali obecavam da cu nesto smisliti...Jer kad si ti lose i ja sam onda jos vise tuzna...Ali drzi me to sto ne znam sta sutra donosi.Mozda mi donese tebe...

Title

I am also feeling bad

Translation

English

Translated by

Gaga_86

Target language: English

I am also feeling bad! I miss you more and more every day! I miss your face, smile, kisses, touch, messages of good night... Honey, I want to cheer you up. I still don't know how, but I promise I will think of something... Because when you feel bad, I feel even worse... But what holds me in life is that I don't know what tomorrow will bring. Maybe it will bring you to me...

Validated by lilian canale

- 24 March 2009 23:45

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		21 March 2009 14:52
	lilian canale จำนวนข้อความ: 14972	Hi Gaga_86, Please check your translation. There are some misspellings to be corrected.
		23 March 2009 20:52
	Gaga_86 จำนวนข้อความ: 34	I checked it! And correct mistakes that I found! I hope that's it...
		23 March 2009 21:57
	lilian canale จำนวนข้อความ: 14972	I've made some corrections and set a poll. OK?
		23 March 2009 21:59
	Gaga_86 จำนวนข้อความ: 34	Ok, thank you very much!
		24 March 2009 20:07
	maki_sindja จำนวนข้อความ: 1206	Hi Gaga, Here are just some minor corrections: "I miss your face, smile, your kisses, touches, messages for good night... Honey, I want to cheer you up." I'm not sure if we could say "...when you are bad..." or it should be "...when you are feeling bad...". What do you think, Lilian?
		24 March 2009 21:45
	Gaga_86 จำนวนข้อความ: 34	Thanks, Maki! I wrote "messages for good night", but Lilian corrected it! I think it can be "when you are bad...", but we will wait to hear what Lilian says!
		24 March 2009 22:55
	lilian canale จำนวนข้อความ: 14972	Hi girls Actually, "Because when you are bad, I am even sadder" would not be the most usual wording in English. I'd say: "(Because)(Since) when you feel bad I feel even worse" or something like: "Your being bad makes me feel even worse" About "Honey, I want you to be happy" or "Honey, I want to cheer you up", both are grammatically correct. We have to keep the most accurate.
		24 March 2009 23:02
	Gaga_86 จำนวนข้อความ: 34	Thanks, Lilian, once again! So, it can be "Because when you feel bad I feel even worse", better then that what I wrote If it can stay "Honey, I want you to be happy", I'd choose this one!
		24 March 2009 23:28
	maki_sindja จำนวนข้อความ: 1206	I agree with you, Gaga. ("Because when you feel bad I feel even worse" ) But I think "Honey, I want to cheer you up" matches the original more than "Honey, I want you to be happy".
		24 March 2009 23:35
	Gaga_86 จำนวนข้อความ: 34	Yes, I think now that too! Thanks Maki a lot! That's better to choose!
		24 March 2009 23:38
	lilian canale จำนวนข้อความ: 14972	What is the correct translation for "razveselim"?
		24 March 2009 23:41
	Gaga_86 จำนวนข้อความ: 34	"razveseliti" - "cheer up"
		24 March 2009 23:44
	lilian canale จำนวนข้อความ: 14972	Oh..so Maki is right. I'll edit that Thanks Maki
		24 March 2009 23:58
	maki_sindja จำนวนข้อความ: 1206	You're welcome. I'm glad I could help.