Translation - Sweeds-Engels - Höjer volymen och Gordons Ganos starka röst...Current status Translation
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 This translation request is "Meaning only". | Höjer volymen och Gordons Ganos starka röst... | | Source language: Sweeds
Höjer volymen och Gordons Ganos starka röst släpps ut i rummet och övertar hela verkligheten.Er musik förgyller mina öron på ett så mästerligt och magiskt sett.Era texter och musik berör så innerligt att det får hela världen att stanna.Det svartvita blir till färg och det tonlösa blir till vackra toner.Tack för allt magiskt ni delar med er av | Remarks about the translation | |
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Translated by  lenab | Target language: Engels
I turn up the volume and Gordons Gano's strong voice spreads out into the room and takes over the whole reality. Your music cheers up my ears in a brilliant and magic way. Your lyrics and music touch so deeply that make the whole world stop. The black and white turn into colours and the loose sounds become beautiful tones. Thank you for all the magic you share with us. |
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Laaste geakkrediteerde redigering deur lilian canale - 24 September 2008 02:13
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21 September 2008 17:01 | | | Hi Lenab,
This is not an easy text. I'd suggest a few small changes in vocabulary in order to sound better in English.
"I turn up the volume and Gordons Gano's strong voice spreads out into the room and takes over the whole reality. Your music cheers up my ears in a brillant and magic way. Your lyrics and music touch so deeply that make the whole world stop. The black and white turn into colours and the loose sounds become beautiful tones. Thank you for all the magic you share with us."
Do these changes interfer in the original meaning?
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21 September 2008 17:12 | | 
lenabNumber of messages: 1084 | No, it makes it better! Actually there are some "not so perfect" expressions in the swedish text. But your suggestion perfectly keeps the meaning of the text!  I'll edit! | | |
21 September 2008 20:25 | | 
piasNumber of messages: 8113 | Lena,
just a question before you have my vote .. is "loose sounds" the same as "voiceless"? | | |
22 September 2008 13:12 | |
lenabNumber of messages: 1084 | Well, it means that the tones are without strength, but perhaps "flat sounds" would be even better? I had voiceless (as a noun) first, but I found Lilian's suggestion better.
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22 September 2008 17:24 | | | Det borde vara "it" insatt efter "deeply that", och det borde vara turns istället för turn. | | |
22 September 2008 23:01 | |
lenabNumber of messages: 1084 | Det borde inte vara "it",snarare "they", "turn" är rätt, eftersom det är plural. |
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